Sunday, July 26, 2009

Undine - part 2

( please read part 1 before you read part 2 )



As I hovered behind the stone, being under a spell of that charming knight, I forgot that animals have such a sharp instinct. As I gaze the knight, something tickled me right on the spot. It was the knight's horse who had been licking me, thinking i was just another water in the waterfall. And I spontaneously laughed! And I think you know what happened then.

Of course, the knight stopped washing his face and started to gawk to his horse's location. I hid under the water at the speed of light. My pulse beat faster and faster and i found it harder for me to breathe. I closed my eyes, hoping that the horse would just go to any place or maybe the knight wouldn't come near his horse, which is still licking me right now. For the sake of Zeus, please let me live.

A few moments later, my wish, both of it came true. But it didn't gave me any luck. So, it was like, the horse did go, and the knight didn't come near the horse's position. But this is the story which makes me scared to death, made me angry and made me petrified. And the beginning of my precious love story.

The horse went to his master, the knight, and despite just sitting around under the tree, it pulled the knight's clothes with it's mouth to my hiding place. I thought i was safe when the horse went away, I thought it would just leave me alone, let me live the rest of my life happily. But life doesn't always go as we wanted. The knight walked along the horse and at last he was brought to my spot. Although at first he didn't realized that there were me, his damn horse bit my dress and of course spontaneously i hit the horse's mouth so it didn't give his master a signal that there were me! ( although the horse didn't seem to feel hurt, even a little bit ) But as humans are smart creatures, of course, the knight felt my scream and presence and he seemed to be shocked to see me. Well, maybe he had never seen a water nymph before

As I felt that he was shocked to see me, I swiftly went back under the water. And I thought I heard the knight screaming at me, wanting me to stay, but i abandoned him, I was too nervous to be right in front of him. That's why i thought by going back to the water is the best choice. So that the knight and his horse couldn't find me.

dusk had changed to dawn, I spent the rest of my night inside the water, wondering had he gone to other place or not, or was he still up there. I couldn't spent my night peacefully that time. It was all full of intrigue. For hours I'd been thinking about going up or not. I wanted to see him, but still, I was so afraid of him, but I wanted to be under his spell again.

In the end, when the sun had arisen, I came up again, and I found him sleeping under the tree. His face, it seemed like he's having a sweet dream. He looked so appealing, he made me wanted to touch him, to fell his skin, to play with his hair and to kiss him.

After gawking at him for a few minutes, I was being under his spell again. The pleasant seduction he gave me by only seeing him from the distance made me lost my control. My body was full of uncontrolled desire of touching him, the insanity and my common sense has gone away, I think I was hypnotized. With my blank mind, I got out of the water, walking right through the green grasses around the waterfall and I perambulate towards him, fascinated by his look.

It was all full of pleasure, being right beside him, touching him, gazing his face, playing with his eyes, whispering right as his ears, sitting right at his laps, his sensually arousing body really really crazed me.

As I was having fun with the sleeping knight, I'd forgotten something. Something was missing around here. It felt kind of weird, but I didn't care about it, all I know was that this was a life time opportunity to be with a man like this, having control upon him. And all of a sudden, the cursed missing thing, that bloody horse licked me and I screamed again.

Of course the knight got awaken too. And I was petrified, I didn't know what to do! My hand was still on his face. As the horse knew that his master had already alert by my appearance, my eyes and his met. We stared at each other for quite a long time. I didn't know what was on his mind, but as soon as i was conscious, quickly stood up and ran towards the water.

Unfortunately, I wasn't fast enough, the knight had been holding my hand for quite a long time because now I'd realized that my hand was hot. He told me to stay. And I just followed what he said. I lowered my body, and I sat right beside him with the fastest pulse ever.

He asked my name, when I told him my name is Undine, he said that it was a very very beautiful name. And he told me I was pretty, and I can see it in his eyes that he was actually a little bit interested in me. As I couldn't stop staring at the ground, he couldn't stop gazing my face either. And of course I was so shy that I started to blush and of course, he started to laugh at me.

I thought he was bored as I didn't start any conversation. He had been the one who talked first and I didn't actually replied him long enough. I didn't know what to say! My head, it was all full of anxiety that he would just leave me alone because I'm not pleasing him enough. But, it seems that he's enjoying his time with me.

He asked me what I was, how come I could hide under the water for hours. He told me he waited for me to came up again from the water for hours until he fell asleep last night. it was totally so sweet of him and I was totally flattered. I told him that I'm a water nypmh, of course I could stay under water for hours, I was made by it. And it seemed that his face was full of intrigue.

Next thing, he said he came from a far away land where there are those mighty dragons and unicorns in the forest. Griffins and hippogryphs were easy to find in the air, lands where the king was a true king, land of peace. He was one of the king's most believed knights. And because peace had been there for decades that's why he was bored there and he went for some adventure. And yesterday, his body was full of fatigue as he'd been riding his horse for days. Oh yeah, his bloody horse's name was Peter.

After a few stories, he looked a little bit shy, his face blushed pinkly and he looked so cute that I couldn't bear to held my laugh. he asked me why I laughed and I told him that he looked cute when he was blushing, and I asked him back why he was blushing. And he told me he was blushing because of my beauty. He said that I was the most beautiful creature ever. Even no one in his country was as beautiful as I was. And I was flattered again.

For hours we had been talking, he said that he needed to be somewhere else and he promised me that he would be back by afternoon. I was so happy by his promise and I blushed again and again. He smirked at my blushing and he made me fell for him for the second time. I was so lucky that I could meet him.

After finished preparing his saddle, and before riding up his horse, he gave me a peck and I was completely silenced by it. When my mouth was opened, he touched my lips with his finger and ssshh me. And of course, my mind was still lost because of that quick kiss. He quickly rode up his horse, sat on the saddle and started to walk slowly.

He walked slowly, and I forgot to ask his name! I was panic, completely panic, but suddenly,he turned his back and he waved his hand, and with a smirked in his face, he said to me "It's Lawrence"

11 comments:

  1. i feel, well, somehow familiar with this undine and his prince charming story HAHAHA :D ayo lanjut ke yg part 3 ;p

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  2. really? cmn bener2 ini gw cmn dapet plotnya spanjang 4 baris doang ce, perkenbangan ceritanya mah gw bikin sendiri. hwhw

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  3. imaginative bgt ming! hahaha. i love your writing style. =)
    ayo lanjutkaaan. nanti terbitin jd novel ya ming.

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  4. wahaha. makasi banget buat yang komen. gw pny mah masi jauh kali dr novel :) :)

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  5. epi ming. gw dusun nih ga ngasih nama. hehee. bisa kali ming. kembangin trus crtanya. bkin yg lain drpd yg lain.

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  6. bagus2.. tp kok namanya lawrence? gay bangeed.. bagusan nama kudanya kmn2.. nyehehehe..

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  7. BAGUSSS miinkk . haha . :))

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  8. mari gw tebak, yang blg lawrence itu gay itu nadia. trus yang trakhir itu aileen. bener ga? whahaha nad, ini nama smw gw ambil dr wikipedia,kecuali nama kuda gw baru mikir sendiri. wkwk

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  9. hehe trnyata aku udah baca yg part 2 :)
    waiting for the third part.

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  10. yang part one udah baca belom lucy? :)

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  11. ya udah dongg
    masa udah baca part 2 lom baca part 1
    gimana sih kamu haha :D

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